Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 07 March 2019 02:02 UTC

Return-Path: <alissa@cooperw.in>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9E0E11312DC; Wed, 6 Mar 2019 18:02:56 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.7
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.7 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=cooperw.in header.b=Bbv+zwyn; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=messagingengine.com header.b=aOZ7kZ9h
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id JmfzAtYNlEqn; Wed, 6 Mar 2019 18:02:54 -0800 (PST)
Received: from out2-smtp.messagingengine.com (out2-smtp.messagingengine.com [66.111.4.26]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AEE501312EA; Wed, 6 Mar 2019 18:02:54 -0800 (PST)
Received: from compute7.internal (compute7.nyi.internal [10.202.2.47]) by mailout.nyi.internal (Postfix) with ESMTP id E25BB2144B; Wed, 6 Mar 2019 21:02:53 -0500 (EST)
Received: from mailfrontend2 ([10.202.2.163]) by compute7.internal (MEProxy); Wed, 06 Mar 2019 21:02:53 -0500
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=cooperw.in; h= content-type:mime-version:subject:from:in-reply-to:date:cc :content-transfer-encoding:message-id:references:to; s=fm2; bh=T in6zdOMNYlQE/Pf+tlYFrvuNAHIP/QdrX0KwUc164Q=; b=Bbv+zwynQ1yaBoBfk f5p+sM8thBXiyY37x8HqPdRpa+oRB87kKc3e+j3lkesNFuhKODY2fSuAOIUEWFC2 7MJeNbymMJMKxi2Df/peARpbkIWOPQlOnKhIqt9IEumK5b792O2EuGMyYCOlu26J uB5TlGYs+PaAo5yr8Q8XrwkdMy3XbvsPECxOS5yjolv+9+0CNQlEPp9IOUN2nn0/ gk92pm9VBbnq70sd9Dmsjo6aK86suDcA9XYo6wQ8C9wSKANizFG1TdNCX3nemSH/ uxlVQImdDLINK0nZPIYDFijbL0t7XfMYDN1hEAYdz1Uidvz5fFs7fYDjreMJrRym pWQPQ==
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d= messagingengine.com; h=cc:content-transfer-encoding:content-type :date:from:in-reply-to:message-id:mime-version:references :subject:to:x-me-proxy:x-me-proxy:x-me-sender:x-me-sender :x-sasl-enc; s=fm2; bh=Tin6zdOMNYlQE/Pf+tlYFrvuNAHIP/QdrX0KwUc16 4Q=; b=aOZ7kZ9hJP3iftDODfD4n3ynMGVN2QPDuDQaV2o2wDDtbVYYCFT7xGp0b bPk8+uIrd3woKaa/ykrdSoRAvAP3gA2RNHojOCJOqj06iRX09z6/ZI7skTg3Ov6Q 99epL/bS8hBr7KmutdcrzKpYFRbx9uipQXH4OxGEPjeVc8sp2ja60dwDwnw+zMPK +58XBWLoAwvrs0pKjT69+G9i4nHn0dzUqE3Qq/G/g8Cx6WtNsB0sxJb39UZs/Cek 4JyzVA6s6FP3PaEDVNt91HTBT9oDIBpHJ9zvpBvhIJoJgvVjExzuLqOq6iDBoT9y /o5/VpNToHrsR8yrDO8x6k/yXC6Ow==
X-ME-Sender: <xms:zXuAXE0d0H7o8ZDVt4f0NCm-rKi08wLRm7F9xiQn80YoK5EzBn-bXw>
X-ME-Proxy-Cause: gggruggvucftvghtrhhoucdtuddrgedutddrfeejgdegvdcutefuodetggdotefrodftvf curfhrohhfihhlvgemucfhrghsthforghilhdpqfgfvfdpuffrtefokffrpgfnqfghnecu uegrihhlohhuthemuceftddtnecusecvtfgvtghiphhivghnthhsucdlqddutddtmdenuc fjughrpegtggfuhfgjfffgkfhfvffosehtqhhmtdhhtddvnecuhfhrohhmpeetlhhishhs rgcuvehoohhpvghruceorghlihhsshgrsegtohhophgvrhifrdhinheqnecuffhomhgrih hnpehivghtfhdrohhrghenucfkphepudejfedrfeekrdduudejrdejgeenucfrrghrrghm pehmrghilhhfrhhomheprghlihhsshgrsegtohhophgvrhifrdhinhenucevlhhushhtvg hrufhiiigvpedt
X-ME-Proxy: <xmx:zXuAXH7kq8xZbS4AdM0xbdmDfLlFeT165NPc14MyZ-7hINLnp96dWg> <xmx:zXuAXDPGChAQgchMfP9VKs4G0R3xL04GCr2tZYD3Mo1ULjk_Rf7V2g> <xmx:zXuAXEerOGUPVMhH9cJgcu8TbOfg5eUsICJ8YKLkHuiy892k9y3ZoA> <xmx:zXuAXAK9MgsXv47rwFQp5Jjud5rU6VRQutZ--yGyKRpWV7pmdK-Ujw>
Received: from rtp-alcoop-nitro5.cisco.com (unknown [173.38.117.74]) by mail.messagingengine.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA id 0072A1030F; Wed, 6 Mar 2019 21:02:52 -0500 (EST)
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 11.5 \(3445.9.1\))
From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
In-Reply-To: <201902121004.x1CA4RSm039091@givry.fdupont.fr>
Date: Wed, 6 Mar 2019 21:02:50 -0500
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc.all@ietf.org
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <5103CCBB-F8C2-41A3-A048-6CBCE4A5B16F@cooperw.in>
References: <201902121004.x1CA4RSm039091@givry.fdupont.fr>
To: Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3445.9.1)
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Za7x0YSdgud6p-YJAl6tq8uC-XQ>
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 07 Mar 2019 02:02:57 -0000

Francis, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 12, 2019, at 5:04 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>; wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20190207
> IETF LC End Date: 20190213
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - 1 page 2: expand the ISUP abbrev (note the Abstract is not considered
>  as a part of the document body).
> 
> - 5 page 4: i.e. -> i.e.,
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
> 
> PS: I checked against Q.850
> 
> _______________________________________________
> Gen-art mailing list
> Gen-art@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art