Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-15

[Kurt Andersen <[e-mail]>]

On Fri, Jun 3, 2016 at 11:48 PM, Peter Yee <[e-mail]> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.  .  .
>
> Document: draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-15
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: June 3, 2016
> IETF LC End Date: June 3, 2016
> IESG Telechat date: June 16, 2016
>
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational
> RFC, but has some nits that should be fixed . . .
>

I've just posted version 16 which incorporates all but a few of the fixes
(exceptions noted below) identified by Peter as well as the issue of the IP
addresses in the appendix which had been noted earlier (aligning them with
RFC 6890).

The one change that I did not incorporate was to hyphenate "long term". In
the situation where those words were used, I did not consider it to be a
singular term (Section 3.2.1, 3rd bullet).

Also, I could not figure out a way to finesse xml2rfc to accept an accented à
so I had to go with the plain 'a'.

The last point had to do with the double spaces in the text version of
several of the contributors names with a middle initial and a period after
the single initial. The second space is being inserted by xml2rfc, it is
not in the original XML. I suppose it can be solved during final edit by
removing the period after the initial.

--Kurt