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From: Ori Finkelman <orifinkelman@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 22 Aug 2019 00:05:30 +0300
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To: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
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Thank you Dan for your time and comments.
I'll fix them for the next revision.

Best regards,
Ori

On Tue, Aug 20, 2019, 12:09 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 2019-08-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of nits
> which
> could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major issues:
> None
> Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments:
>
> 1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN
> 2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph '...the uCDN MUST be differnet
> ...'
>
>
>

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<div dir=3D"auto">Thank you Dan for your time and comments.=C2=A0<div dir=
=3D"auto">I&#39;ll fix them for the next revision.=C2=A0</div><div dir=3D"a=
uto"><br></div><div dir=3D"auto">Best=C2=A0regards,</div><div dir=3D"auto">=
Ori</div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gma=
il_attr">On Tue, Aug 20, 2019, 12:09 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker &lt;<a h=
ref=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org">noreply@ietf.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><b=
lockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px =
#ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Reviewer: Dan Romascanu<br>
Review result: Ready with Nits<br>
<br>
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area<br>
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed<br>
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.=C2=A0 Please treat these comments just<br>
like any other last call comments.<br>
<br>
For more information, please see the FAQ at<br>
<br>
&lt;<a href=3D"https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq" rel=3D"norefe=
rrer noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenA=
rtfaq</a>&gt;.<br>
<br>
Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05<br>
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu<br>
Review Date: 2019-08-20<br>
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28<br>
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat<br>
<br>
Summary:<br>
This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of nits wh=
ich<br>
could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major issues: No=
ne<br>
Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments:<br>
<br>
1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN<br>
2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph &#39;...the uCDN MUST be differn=
et ...&#39;<br>
<br>
<br>
</blockquote></div>

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