[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-karp-bfd-analysis-04
Scott Brim <scott.brim@gmail.com> Sun, 27 July 2014 18:29 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-karp-bfd-analysis-04 Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 2014-07-27 IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-12 IESG Telechat date: not known Summary: Ready with nits Nits/editorial comments: - Run idnits, there are a couple things to tweak. Otherwise it's a clear draft. Scott