Re: [Gen-art] GenART LC review of draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-03

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 03 December 2015 13:47 UTC

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Xiahu & roni: Thank you both of you.

Jari

On 24 Nov 2015, at 14:16, Xuxiaohu <xuxiaohu@huawei.com> wrote:

> Hi Roni,
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> Thanks for your review.  I will fix the editorial error in the next revision.
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> Best regards,
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> Xiaohu
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> From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, November 24, 2015 7:54 PM
> To: draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet.all@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
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> Subject: GenART LC review of draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-03
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
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> Document:  draft-ietf-bess-virtual-subnet-03
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date:2015–11-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2015–11-24
> IESG Telechat date:
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> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Typo in the title of 3.8 “ARP/ND and Unknown Uncast Flood Avoidance” should be Unicast
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