Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC2/Telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-24

"Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com> Thu, 18 August 2016 01:47 UTC

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From: "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC2/Telechat review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-24
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> On Aug 17, 2016, at 8:20 PM, Paul Giralt (pgiralt) <pgiralt@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
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>> On Aug 17, 2016, at 6:26 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
>> 
>>> Back to the current document:  I have reread s3 of RFC 7206 and there are some points that need to be sorted out:
>>> 
>>> - The term 'end-to-end' is given a slightly specialized meaning in RFC 7206.  This is presumably carried through to the draft under review, but the need to refer to the end-to-end definition is not mentioned in the draft.
>>> 
>>> - The use of 'session' as a shorthand for the specific meaning of 'communication session' defined in RFC 7206 ought to be emphasized within the draft since the shorthand in RFC 7206 is technically limited to the RFC (ok, this is somewhat nitpicking but easy to misinterpret.)
>> 
>> I agree with both of the above points. Authors?

I think it is nuanced but worth pointing out those subtleties, especially session->communication session.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

> 
> These are fair points and can easily be addressed with some additional verbiage in Section 3.