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Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 10 October 2018 19:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05
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Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Ian, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Oct 5, 2018, at 8:37 AM, ianfarrer@gmx.com wrote:
> 
> Hi Elwyn,
> 
> Good catch on the points below. They’re fixed in the new version.
> 
> Thanks,
> Ian
> 
>> On 4. Oct 2018, at 17:31, Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com <mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review result: Ready
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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>> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review Date: 2018-10-04
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11
>> 
>> Summary:
>> Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There are a
>> couple of remaining trivial nits.
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> None.
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> None.
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/
>> 
>> s10:  I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made
>> (sorry): OLD: in the table at
>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes
>> table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS
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