[Gen-art] GenART last call review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 13 March 2012 11:25 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

 

Document: draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012-3-13

IETF LC End Date: 2012-3-22

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments:

 

Section 5.1.1 third paragraph change to  "provided by some"