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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 18 March 2020 18:47 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06
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Jouni, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Jan 21, 2020, at 4:03 PM, Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-??
> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
> Review Date: 2020-01-21
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-21
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This document was well written and easy read. I found no complaints. There are
> bogus IDNits warnings for "non-RFC2606-compliant FQDNs".
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> None.
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1) The sentence in lines 248-250 was hard to parse in the first few reads. I
> suggest rewording... somehow. It was like this in RFC2845 already, though.
> 
> 248                    If hosts A.site.example and B.example.net share a key,
> 249              possibilities for the key name include <id>.A.site.example,
> 250              <id>.B.example.net, and <id>.A.site.example.B.example.net.
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