[Gen-art] Review draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing-06.txt
"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 28 November 2014 21:23 UTC
Return-Path: <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 306871A1B6E; Fri, 28 Nov 2014 13:23:29 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.902
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.902 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_HELO_PASS=-0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id NaSkBNdmic6S; Fri, 28 Nov 2014 13:23:27 -0800 (PST)
Received: from maila2.tigertech.net (maila2.tigertech.net [208.80.4.152]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8F61E1A1B4A; Fri, 28 Nov 2014 13:23:27 -0800 (PST)
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by maila2.tigertech.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 91FB72407AF; Fri, 28 Nov 2014 13:23:26 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: Debian amavisd-new at maila2.tigertech.net
Received: from joels-mbp.home (pool-173-49-74-211.phlapa.fios.verizon.net [173.49.74.211]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by maila2.tigertech.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 2803624BF17; Fri, 28 Nov 2014 13:23:26 -0800 (PST)
Message-ID: <5478E7CB.2060202@joelhalpern.com>
Date: Fri, 28 Nov 2014 16:23:23 -0500
From: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.9; rv:24.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/24.6.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: "A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com>, gen-art@ietf.org, dnsop@ietf.org
References: <5478CF22.2080004@nostrum.com>
In-Reply-To: <5478CF22.2080004@nostrum.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1"; format="flowed"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/b0GuMjNClMUcurMM8VGu24EpbiM
Subject: [Gen-art] Review draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing-06.txt
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 28 Nov 2014 21:23:29 -0000
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing-06.txt
DNSSEC Key Rollover Timing Considerations
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-November-2014
IETF LC End Date: 8-December-2014
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
It is unclear to this reader why in 3.2.1, 3.3.1, and 3.3.2 Iret is
after Lzsk/Lksk ends, while in 3.2.2 Iret is before Lzsk, so as to
ensure that Iret completes before Lksk retires. I suspect that this is
a reader issue rather than a correctness issue.
Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2014… A. Jean Mahoney
- [Gen-art] Review draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timi… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Review draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-… Jari Arkko