Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Fri, 01 November 2019 12:07 UTC
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From: CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
Date: Fri, 01 Nov 2019 13:06:48 +0100
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To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
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Dear Paul, We've just posted a new revision (-14) addressing all your comments. Thanks! Carlos On Fri, Oct 18, 2019 at 1:07 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> wrote: > Dear Paul, > > Thanks for the review. > > We will fix the outdated references in the next version of the doc > (addressing also other directorate reviews that might arrive). > > Carlos > > On Sat, Oct 12, 2019 at 8:38 PM Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> > wrote: > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13 >> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat >> Review Date: 2019-10-12 >> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14 >> IESG Telechat date: ? >> >> Summary: >> >> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should >> be fixed before publication. >> >> General: >> >> I found that I lack the subject matter expertise to meaningfully review >> this document. I read it carefully, along with one of the references. >> But it appeared that I would need to internalize quite a number of other >> references before it would be possible to really follow this. >> >> I did review it for form - the document is well written. (Most documents >> that I review have at least a few problems with form.) >> >> IdNits returns a couple of outdated references that should be cleaned up: >> >> == Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of >> draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-17 >> >> == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of >> draft-ietf-rtgwg-atn-bgp-01 >> >> I have no other comments. >> > > > -- > Special Issue "Beyond 5G Evolution": > https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g > > -- Special Issue "Beyond 5G Evolution": https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g
- [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-dist… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-… Alissa Cooper