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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 27 October 2016 13:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
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Thanks for the review!

Jari

On 27 Oct 2016, at 15:11, Vijay K.Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: Oct-27-2016
> IETF LC End Date: Unknown
> IESG Telechat date: Oct-27-2016
> 
> This document is ready as an Proposed Standard.
> 
> Major: 0
> Minor: 0
> Nits: 1
> 
> Nits:
> 1/ S1.2: Perhaps a ':' or a '-' to delimit the term being defined and
> the definition itself.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> - vijay
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