[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-cdni-problem-statement-06

Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Tue, 19 June 2012 18:44 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.

Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-cdni-problem-statement-06
Reviewer: Wassim Haddad
Review Date: 2012-06-19
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-06
IESG Telechat date: 2012-06-21

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as informational standard but one (helpful) addition is suggested.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: 

- Sectiom 1.1: suggest defining "Quality of Experience" (mentioned 4 times in the document)


Wassim H.