[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-krb-wg-des-die-die-die-04

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 03 April 2012 19:11 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document:                draft-ietf-krb-wg-des-die-die-die-04.txt

Reviewer:                 Christer Holmberg

Review Date:            2012-04-03

IETF LC End Date:    2012-04-08

IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary:           The draft is ready for publication, with an editorial issue.

 
Major issues:     -

Minor issues:     -

Nits/editorial comments:

- Section 5, which updates the affected RFCs, is named 'Recommendations'. Would it be better to use 'Updates to RFC XXXX' naming instead, and have a separate section for each RFC updated?

Regards,

Christer