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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08

"Vijay K.Gurbani" <vijay.gurbani@nokia-bell-labs.com> Thu, 27 October 2016 13:11 UTC

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From: "Vijay K.Gurbani" <vijay.gurbani@nokia-bell-labs.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Oct-27-2016
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Oct-27-2016

This document is ready as an Proposed Standard.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 1

Nits:
1/ S1.2: Perhaps a ':' or a '-' to delimit the term being defined and
  the definition itself.

Thanks,

- vijay
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