[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-capacity-metric-method-05

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 12 February 2021 15:39 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-capacity-metric-method-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written text ready for publication

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
8.4.  Running Code

   This section is for the benefit of the Document Shepherd's form, and
   will be deleted prior to final review.

SB> I am wondering if this was supposed to be deleted before this review, or
whether you plan to keep it?