[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Tue, 12 February 2019 10:44 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190207
IETF LC End Date: 20190213
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - 1 page 2: expand the ISUP abbrev (note the Abstract is not considered
  as a part of the document body).

 - 5 page 4: i.e. -> i.e.,

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

PS: I checked against Q.850