Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART / SecDir Review of draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 02 June 2016 14:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART / SecDir Review of draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07
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On 2 Jun 2016, at 10:23, Matt Miller (mamille2) wrote:

> I am the coincidentally-assigned Gen-ART and SecDir reviewer
> for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all 
> IETF
> documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  The 
> Security
> Directorate reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the security area directors.  Please treat these comments just like 
> any
> other last call comments that arrived on time.
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07
> Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
> Review Date: 2016-06-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-01
> IESG Telechat date: N/A
>
> Summary:
>
> This document is ready to be published as a Proposed Standard
> once the nit is taken care of.
>
> I reviewed a previous revision of this document (-04), and all of my
> concerns from the earlier review are addressed herein.
>
> I note this document includes normative references to two 
> Informational
> documents (RFCs 7201 and 7667).  The references are important to
> properly understand some of the security considerations of this
> document, but it appears the responsible AD is to add them to the
> approved downrefs registry.

Just an observation: we did do a second IETF last call for to the 
normative downrefs.

[...]

Thanks!

Ben.