Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 12 March 2019 23:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
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Thanks David,

Subject experts we have. Your review of readability etc. was most welcome.

Adrian

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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12

Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2019-03-12
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review
only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered
and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: None