[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11

[Joel Halpern <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document appears to be ready for publication as an RFC.  The
question of whether it is an Informational RFC or a Proposed Standards track
RFC is one that the ADs should examine.

Major issues:
    This document is quite readable, and quite useful.  If my reading below
    (minor comment about section 4.2) is wrong, then everything is fine. 
    However, reading the text, it does not appear to define SRMS.  Rather, it
    describes a good way to use SRMS to achive smooth SR - LDP integration and
    migration.  As such, this seems to me to be a really good Informational
    Document.

Minor issues:
    Section 4.2 states that it defines the SRMS (Segment Routing Mapping
    Server).  Looking at the relevant routing protocol document, they point to
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution-05 as the
    defining source for the SRMS.  And that document does appear to define the
    SRMS.

Nits/editorial comments: