[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11
Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Mon, 14 May 2018 20:01 UTC
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Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-05-14 IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-24 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document appears to be ready for publication as an RFC. The question of whether it is an Informational RFC or a Proposed Standards track RFC is one that the ADs should examine. Major issues: This document is quite readable, and quite useful. If my reading below (minor comment about section 4.2) is wrong, then everything is fine. However, reading the text, it does not appear to define SRMS. Rather, it describes a good way to use SRMS to achive smooth SR - LDP integration and migration. As such, this seems to me to be a really good Informational Document. Minor issues: Section 4.2 states that it defines the SRMS (Segment Routing Mapping Server). Looking at the relevant routing protocol document, they point to https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution-05 as the defining source for the SRMS. And that document does appear to define the SRMS. Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-s… Joel Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of… Joel Halpern Direct
- Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of… Joel Halpern Direct
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Ahmed Bashandy
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Joel Halpern Direct
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Ahmed Bashandy