[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Thu, 09 June 2016 22:01 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jun-09-2016
IETF LC End Date: Jul-01-2016
IESG Telechat date: Jun-30-2016

This document is ready as an Informational.

Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits: 0

Minor:

- S2, Rules for Lexical Equivalence.  I think some more guidance should
  be provided here.  Specifically, are the following two EIDRs the same?

   urn:eidr:10.5240:7791-8534-2C23-9030-8610-5
   10.5240:7791-8534-2C23-9030-8610-5

  That is, are the schemes (urn, eidr) part of the case-insensitive
  string match?

Thanks,

- vijay
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