Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-klensin-idna-unicode-review-02

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

Thanks, Joel, for taking the time to review this!

Barry

On Thu, Aug 8, 2019 at 10:23 PM Joel Halpern via Datatracker <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
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> Document: draft-klensin-idna-unicode-review-02
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2019-08-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-30
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: THis document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
>
>     This reviewer found the document quite readable and clear about what
> it was
>     doing (with one minor issue noted below.)  The reviewer does not have
> the
>     background to evaluate whether the technical substance is correct or
>     incorrect, and leaves that to the community review.  The document is
> quite
>     persuasive.
>
> Major issues: N/A
>
> Minor issues:
>     I would like to see a little more explicit text in section 3.2.  It
> was not
>     until I reached the IANA considerations (section 8) that I realized
> that
>     section 3.2 intended to mandate that the IESG create and where
> applicable
>     use a broad review team for the new code point review.  I think a
> sentence
>     or so along the lines of "Creation of this team when needed is a new
>     responsibility placed on the IESG by this document." would have helped.
>
> Nits/editorial comments: N/A
>
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