[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-11

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Sat, 04 May 2019 01:21 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-11
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-applicability-actn-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-03
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC .
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Some acronyms are not spelled out at first use.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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