[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04
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Reviewer: David Schinazi Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04 Reviewer: David Schinazi Review Date: 2021-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Thank you for a well-written document. It introduces a lot of terminology I wasn't used to, but does a good job of explaining it. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - The abstract defines all the acronyms (which is great) except PBB, could it define that one too? - Section 2.1 doesn't really explain what a "P node" is.
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