[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 25 October 2016 23:29 UTC
Return-Path: <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0047612995E for <gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 25 Oct 2016 16:29:46 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.22
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.22 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=-0.01, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=-0.01, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id nmRbKHfytQps for <gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com>; Tue, 25 Oct 2016 16:29:44 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from usplmg21.ericsson.net (usplmg21.ericsson.net [198.24.6.65]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 3CE2F1298C4 for <gen-art@ietf.org>; Tue, 25 Oct 2016 16:29:44 -0700 (PDT)
X-AuditID: c6180641-e87ff70000000a0b-61-580f967e03e2
Received: from EUSAAHC003.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [147.117.188.81]) by (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id 85.3B.02571.E769F085; Tue, 25 Oct 2016 19:29:36 +0200 (CEST)
Received: from EUSAAMB107.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.124]) by EUSAAHC003.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.81]) with mapi id 14.03.0319.002; Tue, 25 Oct 2016 19:29:41 -0400
From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
To: "draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual.all@tools.ietf.org>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10
Thread-Index: AdIvDCtDbuQ3q0bNRDyBrWSfgjsgwQ==
Date: Tue, 25 Oct 2016 23:29:39 +0000
Message-ID: <ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A4E7A7118@eusaamb107.ericsson.se>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [147.117.188.9]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A4E7A7118eusaamb107erics_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFnrELMWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyuXRPoG7DNP4Ig9ZNNhZTr65msrj66jOL A5PHkiU/mTy+XP7MFsAUxWWTkpqTWZZapG+XwJUxd/YypoLbOhULZjQzNzD+Vuti5OSQEDCR WDj7GmsXIxeHkMAGRoldq06ygSSEBJYzShxdlwBiswlYSGz//ZwVxBYR6GOU2NGj1MXIwSEs 4CTxcbUqRNhd4mLTfqgSPYnzk0+BjWERUJV4tOszM4jNK+ArcezWSyYQm1FATOL7qTVgNrOA uMStJ/OZIO4RkFiy5zwzhC0q8fLxP1YIW1FiX/90doj6fIlL049BzRSUODnzCcsERsFZSEbN QlI2C0kZRFxHYsHuT2wQtrbEsoWvmWHsMwceMyGLL2BkX8XIUVpckJObbmS4iREY8sck2Bx3 MO7t9TzEKMDBqMTDq6DLHyHEmlhWXJl7iFGCg1lJhPfec6AQb0piZVVqUX58UWlOavEhRmkO FiVx3ush98OFBNITS1KzU1MLUotgskwcnFINjGtcGfzqjqq9y2aeezrkTLxo9x+FWLm18z4/ i1uuUtA7T4r5XnCp6uSLudcZby77UpO7oapqU61m8QeZm0uMlF4sk9BUXJVwoVbvxZoNSZLc s/fuKvXp+7g+oLBX96ETV61D9cwb7x59KeNjFT6n0LfBMPVaAMOHYwfybkhN21naZLSJQ+C1 sxJLcUaioRZzUXEiAHW8+gd1AgAA
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/eCoWXAdAWL49Yzwcd8uThnp7bRw>
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Oct 2016 23:29:46 -0000
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2016-10-25 IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-25 IESG Telechat date: 2016-11-03 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC, but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -General: the introduction should clarify the downside or extra complexity with the proposed method (does the client need to be modified? what was the reason the web did not opt for this method at first place? are there cases where this method cannot be applied? -[Page 4], "are a one of"----->"are one of" -[Page 46], Section 18, not sure if it should be left in the RFC or removed? Please check with chair or Responsible AD. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Jari Arkko