[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 13 July 2022 07:12 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2022-07-13
IETF LC End Date: 2022-07-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a BCP document with a nit
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 5.2 ROV is not expanded but earlier in the section Route Origin
Validation with referene to RFC6811 is mentioned . in which case "RPKI-based
route origin validation" should be "RPKI-based route origin validation (ROV)"