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Re: [Gen-art] [art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 22 January 2020 16:45 UTC

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Cc: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>, last-call@ietf.org, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis.all@ietf.org, Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02
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Thanks!

> On Jan 21, 2020, at 4:27 PM, Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> wrote:
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> On 1/21/20 10:49, Alissa Cooper wrote:
>> I think a good solution here would be to add a sentence along the lines of the sentence above to the shepherd write-up. That way the rationale for the substitution is captured in the document’s history but not in the document itself.
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> Thanks for the suggestion. I have added corresponding text to the shepherd's write-up.
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