Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 21 January 2016 13:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns-client-subnet-06
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Thanks for your review, Russ!

> In Section 6, I think it would be useful to say that the SCOPE
> PREFIX-LENGTH in a response MUST be less than or equal to the SOURCE
> PREFIX-LENGTH from the request.
> 
> In Section 7.3, last paragraph, last sentence, I think that "should"
> ought to be in all capital letters.
> 
> In Section 7.4, fourth paragraph, last sentence, I think that
> "recommended" ought to be in all capital letters.

I agree with these suggestions.

Jari