[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-09.txt

"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Fri, 24 February 2012 10:02 UTC

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Document:draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-09.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2012-02-24
IETF LC End Date: 2012-02-28

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

- I have not reviewed Section 6 of this document, which is the actual MIB 
structure, because there is nothing I can comment on it. Considering that 
this draft has been produced in the ADSLMIB working group, I believe the 
expertise lies in the WG.

- I've noticed in the data tracker that IANA has requested a 
clarification with respect to the IANA Considerations section. The 
resolution of this discussion should be documented in the IANA 
Considerations section.

/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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