[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 27 April 2018 04:30 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-sr-rsvp-coexistence-rec-03
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-04-26
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-20
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     As noted in my email response to this document revision, the authors have
     responded to my earlier comments.  While I think there are significant
     regards in which the document should be clearer, and would be helped by
     such increased clarity, it is technically correct and publishable as is.

Nits/editorial comments:  N/A

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-te… Joel Halpern
Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Alissa Cooper