Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-reverse-metric-15

"Naiming Shen (naiming)" <naiming@cisco.com> Sun, 21 October 2018 21:21 UTC

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From: "Naiming Shen (naiming)" <naiming@cisco.com>
To: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-isis-reverse-metric-15
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Hi Stewart,

Thanks for detailed review and comments, please see some
replies inline. the modified version diff is attached, please reivew.

thanks.
- Naiming