Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-uta-xmpp-05

Peter Saint-Andre - &yet <peter@andyet.net> Mon, 06 April 2015 17:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-uta-xmpp-05
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On 4/4/15 1:06 AM, Leif Johansson wrote:
> On 04/04/2015 08:30 AM, Roni Even wrote:
>> Hi Peter,
>> This text looks good
>> Thanks
>> Roni
>>
>
> I must admit that TZ+threading became too much of a challenge for
> tracking this so I have to ask: are we ok for the gen-art review
> comments now or if not, what is left to address?

Yes, that was a lot of back-and-forth.

I've checked changes into source control, if that helps:

https://github.com/stpeter/uta/commit/63985e345a0589aaca16356c67c0e4507e801b88#diff-6e9d001d331f253ccc440b60aed61980

However, a revised I-D might be most useful and I don't want to submit 
that until after IETF Last Call has ended.

Peter

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