Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-tls-alpn-06

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 02 October 2019 20:28 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-tls-alpn-06
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Linda, thanks for your review. One comment below.

> On Sep 20, 2019, at 6:45 PM, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-acme-tls-alpn-06
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2019-09-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
> This document specifies a new "challenges" for Automated Certificate Management
> Environment
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> The 3rd paragraph of the Introduction stated that this New Challenges requires
> negotiating a new application layer protocol, but no existing software
> implements this protocol. Therefore the ability to fulfill this challenges is
> effectively "opt-in". I find the statement is quite confusing. Does it mean
> that it is necessary to manually add processing to handle the challenge because
> there is no implementation of auto negotiation?

I think the point of this text is just to explain why the validation model was designed as it was — because it need not accommodate any existing deployed base.

I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

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> Thanks,
> Linda Dunbar
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