Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 06 February 2020 13:35 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Tim, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot and pointed to your review.

Alissa


> On Oct 2, 2019, at 5:09 PM, Tim Evens via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Tim Evens
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-dtn-bpsec-12
> Reviewer: Tim Evens
> Review Date: 2019-10-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Under section 1.4, BPA is referenced in bullet 1 and 2 but is first defined in
> bullet 4.  Suggest defining that in bullet 1.
> 
> On page 10:
> 
> * "never used to sign the cipher- text provided" has an extra space between
> cipher- and text.
> 
> * "The BCB is decrypted by security- aware nodes in the" has an extra space
> between security- and aware.
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