Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC Review of? draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Fri, 18 May 2018 17:08 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Fri, 18 May 2018 13:08:55 -0400
Cc: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane.all@ietf.org, anima@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC Review of? draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13
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Hi,

I was wondering if any response to Elwyn’s review besides Brian’s is forthcoming and if so when the authors or shepherd expect to send it.

Thanks,
Alissa

> On Apr 18, 2018, at 8:50 PM, Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de> wrote:
> 
> Sorry, trying to get through backlog. Took longer than expected...
> 
> On Thu, Apr 19, 2018 at 01:04:53AM +0100, Elwyn Davies wrote:
>> Hi.
>> It has been about 6 weeks since responses to the review were postponed till after IETF 101.... any thoughts yet?
>> Regards,Elwyn
>> 
>> 
>> Sent from Samsung tablet.
>> -------- Original message --------From: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Date: 02/03/2018  12:04  (GMT+00:00) To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane.all@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC Review of
>>   draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13 
>> Just taking up one point for the time being....  
>> Even if the reference model is informational, I was relying on RFC 8067, s1, para 3:
>>    Section 2 of [RFC3967] lists some conditions under which downrefs may
>>    make sense.  In addition to those, it has become common for working
>>    groups to produce foundational documents (which contain important
>>    information such as terminology definitions and architectural design
>>    and considerations) at Informational status, and those documents are
>>    often needed as normative references in the Standards Track protocol
>>    documents that follow. 
>> I would say that sombody implementing ACP really needs to have read and understood the reference model and so I would argue:1. That it needs to be normative,and2. The downref is sanctioned by the language in RFC 8067. 
>> I am on holiday for a week and others are fighting the draft deadline so perhaps we can postpone discussion of the other points until the draft panic has subsided.
>> Cheers,Elwyn
>> Sent from Samsung tablet.
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