Re: [Gen-art] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13: (with COMMENT)

Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net> Wed, 10 October 2018 18:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13: (with COMMENT)
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On 10/10/2018 12:54 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote:
> The Gen-ART review for attrleaf is athttps://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/dq-cwawY1UqoGJWFUxQPuWv0oPc.

hmmm.  I see that its addressing should have reached me but I'm not 
finding a copy in my mail archive.  Thanks for the pointer:

> From: Erik Kline <ek@google.com>
> To: <gen-art@ietf.org>
> Cc: dnsop@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf.all@ietf.org
> Message-ID: <153799182298.21553.7443559303630152628@ietfa.amsl.com>
> Date: Wed, 26 Sep 2018 12:57:03 -0700
> Subject: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13

> Section 2:  "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me.  "DNS node names" perhaps?
> 
> Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/?
> 
> Section 5: s/in the of/in the/?

done.

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