Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

Pete Resnick <presnick@qualcomm.com> Fri, 21 September 2012 15:44 UTC

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On 9/21/12 10:23 AM, Pete Resnick wrote:
>> -- The abstract should mention that this obsoletes 5721
>
> It does.

Sorry. You said abstract, not intro. Got it.

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