[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-redacted-14

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Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-redacted-??
Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
Review Date: 2023-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2023-09-04
IESG Telechat date: 2023-09-21

Summary:

This document describes an RDAP extension for specifying methods of redaction
of RDAP responses and explicitly identifying redacted RDAP response fields,
using JSONPath as the default expression language.¶

Draft is well written and ready for publication.

Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
None