[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry-07

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Thu, 08 December 2016 22:05 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry-07
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2016-12-08
IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-08
IESG Telechat date: 2016-12-15

Summary: Ready

Thank you for addressing my comments on version -06 of this document.


Major Concerns: None

Minor Concerns: None

Nit:  In Section 1, paragraph 1, it says:

	... not defined in either [RFC4944] and [RFC6282].

s/and/or/