Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 12 March 2015 10:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
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Big thanks for your review, Ben.

Jari

On 23 Dec 2014, at 01:40, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04
> Reviewer: Ben Campbell
> Review Date: 2014-12-22
> IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
> 
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC. Its well written and easy to understand.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you to change it at this point in the process. :-)
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> -- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references.
> 
> -- REQ2:
> 
> Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in zero configuration mode?
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