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Brendan Moran <Brendan.Moran@arm.com> Thu, 11 June 2026 09:48 UTC

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From: Brendan Moran <Brendan.Moran@arm.com>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Roni,


Thank you for your GENART review of draft-ietf-suit-update-management.


You noted that the term “primary-cell” in Section 5.3 was unfamiliar and suggested adding it to the terminology section.


We reviewed this comment during preparation of the latest revision (-12) and updated the document accordingly.


Could you please confirm whether you consider the issue resolved in the current version, or whether there are any remaining concerns that should be addressed before publication?


Thank you again for the review and helpful feedback.


Regards,


Brendan Moran


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Date: Saturday, 20 December 2025 at 11:27
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Subject: [Suit] draft-ietf-suit-update-management-10 ietf last call Genart review

Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management
Title: Update Management Extensions for Software Updates for Internet of Things
(SUIT) Manifests Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2025-12-20
IETF LC End Date: 2026-01-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nit

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In section 5.3 there is a term primary-cell which I am unfamiliar with. Can you
add it to the terminology section


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