[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-drip-reqs-13

[Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-drip-reqs-??
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2021-06-22
IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-07
IESG Telechat date: 2021-07-01

Summary:

It is a very interesting problem space and this document provides a good
overview along with the references.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

* The term RID is used to mean slightly different things in different locations
of the document. One very obvious example is in this sentence in Page 6

"However, applications of RID beyond RID itself"

probably need to be clarified a bit

* Section 4.1.1.

-> The following sentence fragment in GEN-3 is confusing

"UAS ID is in a registry and identification of which one"

Suggest rewording to

"UAS ID is in a registry and identification of the registry"

if my understanding of the intent is correct.

-> GEN-6: Not sure if "Finger" is a obvious description of this requirement for
somebody who has not read RFC742. Suggest rewording to something more broadly
understandable (e.g. "User Information")

-> It feels like Section 4.1.2. might be better placed before 4.1.1. as it
addressed some of the questions I had on the GEN-* requirements. The other
rationale sections were fine either way, but it may make sense to describe the
rationale consistently before the requirement.s

Nits/editorial comments: