Re: [Gen-art] [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Sun, 13 September 2020 03:41 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09
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On Sat, Sep 12, 2020 at 3:09 PM Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <
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> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-09
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2020-09-12
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-14
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Ready with  few nits.
>
> Major issues:
> None
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> Minor issues:
> s3.3:  The
> Nits/editorial comments:
>

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-MSK