[Gen-art] Review of draft-elie-nntp-tls-recommendations-01

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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready

I think this document is ready for publication.

I have comment, which is just a suggestion concerning document
structure. Currently the updates/changes to RFC4642 are listed in
Introduction. On the other hand there is a specific section for
recommendations. I would move the updates/changes to RFC4642 into its
own section just to make the document a bit more structured.