[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-10

[Ines Robles via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-10
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2023-04-10
IETF LC End Date: 2023-04-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document defines a new Traffic Selector (TS) Type for Internet Key
Exchange version 2 to add support for negotiating Mandatory Access Control
(MAC) security labels as a traffic selector of the Security Policy Database
(SPD).  The new TS type is TS_SECLABEL.

The document is well written and easy to read.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3.2: "198.51.0/24" --> "198.51.100.0/24" ?

Question: Section 2.1, the Security Label should be at least of one octet. Is
there a limit of octets for this field?

Thank you for this document,

Ines.