[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-name-encoding-08

Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 04 July 2024 13:08 UTC

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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-name-encoding-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2024-07-04
IETF LC End Date: 2024-07-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication with minor nits-

Major issues: None

Minor issues:
1) Section 7 Security Considerations is a bit thin.. aren't there anything a
rogue host could do?

Nits/editorial comments:
1) Some acronyms (ETR and 'x'TR) are not expanded. Please expand on the first
use. I assume xTR refers ITR and ETR. 2) line 280: s/eTR/ETR

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-l… Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker
[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ie… Dino Farinacci