[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-grow-diverse-bgp-path-dist-07

Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Mon, 16 July 2012 06:28 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, 
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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-grow-diverse-bgp-path-dist-07
Reviewer: Wassim Haddad
Review Date: 2012-07-15
IETF LC End Date: 2012-07-19
IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-19

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as informational standard.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Editorial nit: suggest replacing "then" with "than" (except in section 4.2)


Wassim H.