[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-06

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 13 May 2016 20:21 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-06.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-10
IESG Telechat date: 2016-05-19

Summary: Ready
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Comments:
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1) Thanks for fixing numerous points from my Last Call review.

2) I also raised the issue of whether BCP is the right status, in view
of sections 5 - 9 which refer to open questions and  possible future
protocol extensions. I would prefer to see these sections clearly
labelled as *not* part of the normative content. After feedback from
the authors, I don't see this as a show-stopper, but I think that
readers expecting a concrete description of a solution will be a
little surprised.