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Meral, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Aug 2, 2019, at 3:11 AM, Meral Shirazipour =
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> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-15
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2019-08-01
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-01
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class=3D"">Meral, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection =
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