[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Sun, 09 December 2018 20:05 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area 
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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-12-09
IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-12
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Issues: None

It was very easy to review this document because a diff with RFC7810 
showed me everything of note, and this was consistent with Appendix A.

Changing an RFC in a way that is not backwards compatible is 
problematic, but the authors have clearly considered the issues and find 
this the best of bad alternatives.

The reference to draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-14 is now out of date. I'm not 
raising it as a nit because chasing references to drafts is futile and 
this will be fixed by the editor.